Thursday, February 5, 2009

My side of the mountain Chapter 18(paragraph)

In my side of the mountain chapter 18, sam made moccasins to walk in the cold snow. Sam had named four birds. Their names were Mr. Bracket, Mrs. O'Brien, Mrs. Callaway, and Mrs. Federio. Sam named the birds these names for this reason. It reminded him of 23 Avenue. Bando had come around 4:30 christmas eve. Sam was making him Rabbit skinned moccasins. Bando told sam about him in the newspaper clippings. After Bando told sam about the newspaper clippings, they played christmas songs on the willow whistles. Bando was too tired to play more after that.
Sam's dad had came in the morning. He knew where to find him from the news paper. Sam's onion soup was cooked to perfection when they ate it for christmas dinner.  Sam iced fished for breakfast that morning and he caught a fish for breakfast. Sam's dad had stayed the longest. His dad left by a different route than he came. He id this because he did't want anyone to hot trail him and find Sam.

25 comments:

  1. good but you should write an outline and u spelled did wrong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    a spelling teacher

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  2. I HATE THIS BOOK IT SUCKS. I CANT BELIVE IT WON A MEDAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

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    1. I have to read this book u know how I feel

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    2. I bet you have never read the book, asshole. Shut the fuck up. Cause' I bet YOU couldn't write a book as good as this, it's a children's book. Fuck off.

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  3. I hate this freaking book it is terrible!!!!!!!

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    1. You couldn't write one, could you? Don't hate

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  4. quit hateing on people achivments what have you done this year

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  5. THIS BOOK SUCKS!!! I didnt read chapter six and need to write the summery. HELP?

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  6. hey r any of u gay and if u are do u wnt 2 go out cuz i am very gay ok girlfriend

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  7. I'm calling the cops on you Devon Young of Porterville California. You are so dumb

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  8. this book is so good...... i love it

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  9. this book is pretty good

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  10. Thank you!! you just helped me with my homework :P

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  11. dont even comment if u r gunna be a dickface~Nate Goers

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  12. I don't get it why people hate this book. It is a good book to read when your internet and stuff dies and you have nothing else to do.

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    1. It is okay. I have read better. I am stuck reading this for school.

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  13. I need that for school and I read all the summaries you wrote. I saw many mistakes!
    Be careful. Ok? I am just in grade 5

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  14. bruh you need to learn how to spell

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